Have I written "more imagery" on your essay?
If so, this means that your essay lacks detail, and therefore is vague and a little bland. Spice it up by adding more imagery, or words that refer to the senses. Imagery instantly brings your writing to life!
What are the 5 types of imagery?
- sight words = red, tall, long, empty
- sound words = bang, squeal, shriek
- feeling words = soft, rough, smooth
- scent words = odor, aroma, tropical
- taste words = sweet, sour, bland
Examples of Imagery in Action
Watch how imagery can bring a boring sentence to life.
- Without imagery: When I got home late, I could tell mom was angry.
- With imagery: When I pushed open the creaky old door, I was instantly greeted with the sight of hardened red lines on my mother's face. I could hear her heavy sigh from all the way across the dimly lit kitchen; the long hands of the antique wall clock behind her tilted head rested on the black number 12.
Picture taken from: http://zoe-harrington.blogspot.com/
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